Said the Devil to the Lord,
"You know sometimes I do get bored"
Said the Lord to the Man,
"Do not fear, He knows what things I can."
The Devil laughed in reply,
"You still don't trust me, you think I'd lie?"
The Lord shook his head,
"I know what secrets you have said,
What deseptions you have set."
Said the Devil, "Let's make a bet,"
"I'll return each soul each man,
If beat me at chess you can."
Said the Lord, "I'll see your bet,
But it's my terms that we'll set."
"Fine by me," Devil grinned,
"You return those who've sinned,
If you win, you get this man."
"Those are terms I think I can,
Agree upon," Devil shook,
The game started, scores Man took.
The Lord started awful quick,
He had his pawns move quite slick,
But lies can always play thier part,
Cheating is the Devil's art,
As the Lord turned away,
Devil turned the play,
The Lord lost the game,
And like wise Man the same.
The Devil and the Lord still play,
Devil cheats, gains more each day.
And sand riddle trickles away.
Good rhyming; good message.
ReplyDeleteWow. Very good message indeed. A very brilliant poem. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteGreat message...well done!
ReplyDeleteWell written and quite the important message.
ReplyDeleteTeresa
Nicely done!!
ReplyDeleteClever piece. This one needs some music! Well done.
ReplyDeleteepic image! Nice work!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this piece a lot. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI liked the words that I just read,
ReplyDeletethe book of Job turned on it's head.
heh :)
ReplyDeletenext time Parcheesi?
Rene
Very fun, true too
ReplyDeletesmiles. it reminds me of a joke i heard at summer camp years and years ago...perhaps a change of game? smiles. nice magpie!
ReplyDeleteNice imagery -- clever story.
ReplyDeleteI liked this. A thought-provoking poem.
ReplyDeletelovely job!
ReplyDeletecool style!
i think i see job in there somewhere... the sky is holding
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