Wateringcan, Alone on the bench, Too long have you sat, Evaporating away. Rust eats your sides, Iron oxide your coat, Notice your friends, Grown in by your children, Clothed with your plants, Around you they blossom, Now you watch them grow.
Very cool! loved this, it really has a wonderful flow and i like how you personified the watering can, which gave your poem depth. great job with this magpie, i really like it.
Very cool! loved this, it really has a wonderful flow and i like how you personified the watering can, which gave your poem depth. great job with this magpie, i really like it.
ReplyDeletePatience, gee thanx. i do always try to give objects a personality, just to keep my reader wondering whats real anymore!
ReplyDeletenice focus on the watering can,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your way of doing it.
I liked this part:
ReplyDeleteToo long have you sat,
Evaoprating away.
Nice job.
P.S. You should change your timezone...it's actually 3:10PM.
ha woops, how do i change the time zone?
ReplyDeleteYour Magpie is delightful!!!
ReplyDeletethe art of mnemonics! you have a way with this form, witty ponygirl :)
ReplyDeleteRead vertically this is so cute! Horizontally, profound.
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very clever! Love it!
ReplyDeleteexcellent...around you they grow..is there any greater satisfaction?
ReplyDeleteFitting acrostic! I like the microcosm effect.
ReplyDeleteClever acrostic. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeletegreat job ---you pulled all the thoughts together with focus...nice..bkm
ReplyDeleteThis is great.
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ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely Magpie. Very creative.
ReplyDeleteTeresa
Excellent acrostic!
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